Friday, February 12, 2016

Time Writing #3



        Furious 7 is my favorite movie because it represents a bunch of friends being brought together by fighting to make a living by racing and catching criminals. This movie is also my favorite movie because they dedicated the movie to Paul Walker after he passed away in a terrible car crash.
       An example of this group of friends being brought together is when they go after the people who had killed one of their friends in a previous car crash in Tokyo. With the help of some special agents they find the guys responsible for the crash and stop him from doing more damage to people and a military base that was in danger of being exposed.
       Everyone should watch this movie because it shows how being close with friends can actually be beneficial but also it has a very nice tribute to Paul Walker and his family. (BE AWARE IT MIGHT MAKE YOU CRY!)

2 comments:

  1. I like this, you really stated the main pints on why you enjoy this movie. Good work!

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  2. I particularly liked your middle paragraph. It was a good transition form your first and gave a specific example that tied back to your first point. When you have to proof read and edit, you may want to think of ways to write shorter sentences to ensure your writing with clarity. For example, in your second sentence in your second paragraph, I wasn't entirely sure if the military base was in danger from the bad guy. Good job, though! I haven't seen the Furious movies and now I kind of want to : ) Beth

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